[ he'll watch her make the adjustment with a pleased nod, scanning the rest of the page in interest, if not admiration, at how easy it is to read. take this from someone who's gotten lost in the forest far more than just once, possibly. ]

Not that I know of, but then again, I haven't checked — and even if they exist... you know what old maps made back in the day look like, don't you?

[ —frayed and yellow, the edges curling inwards from age. the markings left on it are usually faded out and nearly impossible to decipher. either way, her map is a great improvement above all the other maps, unprecedented in readability and detail!!

and, just to check: ] You're going to finish this map, right?